Really? Because there are a lot of people out there who would be thrilled if they could create a finished piece like this. Excellent color use that includes some great contrast as well as subtle detail. Superb use of value as a compositional and atmospheric tool. Dramatic composition that utilizes line, shape, and character poses in a very skilled manner... I mean, I'm all for being able to self-critique in order to improve one's talent and skill, but I think "not very satisfactory" is going a little overboard.